Great to see something fresh on this godawful site
Great stuttery amen drums, relaxing choppy synths, overall an interesting feel. I would have gotten into a few more layers to add a bit of body and keep the repetitiveness interesting, but it's still great.
What mostly caught my eye was that you attached a story with your post. Great stuff, it really took me somewhere else. I write as well - you should check out the last song i posted "SUN TONGUE"
Keep up the good work.